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Akane Tendou Gym Clothes by keidashu

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Personally, I think you could od it better. Starting with a good sides - pose. It wasn't easy to draw and you managed to draw it quite well. Same goes to one of the hardest things to draw - fingers Then shades - there aren't much of them, but they're mostly well placed. So this leads us to the things that I think could be better. First her face. You always do very good faces and I had a feeling that style or Rumiko Takahashi is something easy for you. But looking at her eyes, I can't shake of the feeling that she has a squint. Don't you think, she should look at the boot and lace? Then, there are almost no shades at her face. Body is well shaded, hair too, but face is not.
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keidashu Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Thanks for the critique.
Her eyes aren't looking at the laces because she's teasing us ;)
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FFecchifan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
No problem, I'm happy I could help.
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